Thesis:
SNAP should be monitored closely, not spent on junk foods,
and only be available to those who have been fingerprinted and drug tested.
ESSAY: Five
Paragraphs.
Paragraph 1. Introduction. 3-5 sentences. The last sentence is my Thesis
Paragraph 2. Monitored closely.
Paragraph 2. Monitored closely.
TS,
F, O, O, F, O, O, CS
Paragraph 3. Not spent on junk foods
TS, F, O, O, F, O,
O, CS.
Paragraph 4. Fingerprint and drug tested.
TS,
F, O, O, F, O, O, CS
Paragraph 5: Conclusion… 3-5 sentences…. Restate my thoughts.
Introduction: 3-5
sentences….
Define,
Explain the problem
Solve the problem in my thesis
Introduction and paragraph number 2.....using the TS, F, O, O, F, O, O, CS format.
Introduction and paragraph number 2.....using the TS, F, O, O, F, O, O, CS format.
Food stamps are a way for those who
are down on their luck to receive money from the government to purchase food
for a period of time. However, some
people abuse this handout. In fact, some
people even sell their food stamps for cash to spend on drugs or other
vices. The way to solve this problem is
to monitor food stamps closely, not allow them spent on junk foods, and only
let them be available to those who have been fingerprinted and drug tested.
Food
stamps should be monitored closely. For example, according to Sam Hananel from the
Associated Press, “Food-stamp fraud costs taxpayers about $750 million a year.” This shows that tax payers are losing
millions of dollars a year due to those who abuse their privileges. So, the food stamp program should be
monitored closely. In addition, Mr. Hananel goes on to report
that “about 850,000 people were investigated for possible food-stamp fraud.
About 2,000 stores were sanctioned for illegal conduct, and 1,200 stores were
permanently removed from the food-stamp program.” It’s clear that food stamp fraud is very
widespread. Closer monitoring procedures
are needed to curb food stamp abuse. If taxpayers
monitor the food stamp program more closely, they might be able to eliminate
these types of abuses.
