Wednesday, March 27, 2013

Final Projects-



What goes in my portfolio? 
Narrative, Descriptive, Compare/Contrast, and Argument essays.
Drafts of those essays. 
Notes from in class. 
Work from class. 
Research. 
Journals.
Handouts.
Anything related to our class goes in your portfolio, and your best essay goes on your blog, with your final project.

What’s my Final Project?
Ready?  Your project is to prove you know what you should know based on the W.P.A. Guidelines and using your own work from class as evidence.



Rhetorical Knowledge
  • Focus on a purpose
Define: 
Focusing on a purpose means to stay on track and continue to pay attention to the reason I am writing my essay.
Explain:
In my narrative essay, my purpose was to entertain and make people laugh at my expense.  I tried to be funny when I wrote that I, “fell off my bike head first and landed flat on my nose in front of the cheerleaders.”  Later in my essay I wrote that I was so embarrassed that “even though I had to ride a mile out of my way, I never passed that spot again on my bike.”  In my last paragraph, I wrote, “I learned a valuable lesson.  Never try to show off on your bike in front of cheerleaders, especially if you are 20 years old.”  My purpose was to entertain, or be funny, and from the quotes above, it is clear that I tried to do that throughout my essay.

  • Write in several genres
Define:  To write in several genres means to be able to write different types of essays. 

Critical Thinking, Reading, and Writing
  • Understand a writing assignment as a series of tasks, including finding, evaluating, analyzing, and synthesizing appropriate primary and secondary sources

Define:  This means that writing isn’t just one thing.  It’s lots of things like looking for sources and deciding which to include in my writing.
Processes
  • Be aware that it usually takes multiple drafts to create and complete a successful text
Define:  Writing takes a lot of tries to be successful.

  • Develop flexible strategies for generating, revising, editing, and proof-reading
Define:  This means I have many ways to think of ideas, fix essays, and find mistakes.

  • Understand writing as an open process that permits writers to use later invention and re-thinking to revise their work
Define:  This means I can go back and rethink to fix what I don’t like.

Knowledge of Conventions
  • Practice appropriate means of documenting their work
Define: This means I can keep track of where I got information so others can check it.
  • Control such surface features as syntax, grammar, punctuation, and spelling.
Define: This means I can write mistake free.

Project Presentations... What's our final project?

1.  Attendance-

2.  Papers in and out-

3.  Groups and editing-

4.  Final Project Introduction and Notes....

WPA GUIDELINES

Monday, March 25, 2013

Drafting time... Use me for help....

1.  Journal:

What is your argument topic and what do you think is your best fact that supports your opinion?

1.5

Introduction

Provide history, state the problem.

Explain the problem.

Solve the problem with a thesis.

SAMPLE:


Vietnam Veterans have never had the respect they deserve.  When they returned home from an unpopular war, they were spit on, yelled at, and called “baby killers.”  Unfortunately for them, their mistreatment is ongoing.  In fact, today, most Vietnam veterans are suffering from poor health care and denial of services they deserve. After serving in the war, when these men and women returned home, the government let them down.  80% of Vietnam veterans don’t use or have access to proper health care, and this is because the government doesn’t want them to.  As they slowly die off from diseases related to their service, including the effects of PTSD, these veterans have one last hope to get the care they need, and that hope is us. Vietnam veterans deserve the government to recognize and take responsibility for the medical traumas these veterans face today because  (1) the veterans deserve it, (2)most of the problems are treatable, and (3) treating these service members now will reduce the costs of care in the long run.


2.  Drafting time.  Please use your completed outline to begin drafting your introduction to your essay.  Don't forget to make the thesis the last sentence.  Typed draft due in class on Wednesday.

3.  Reminder to gather project materials.  Blog reminder.

Wednesday, March 20, 2013

What's Your Reason?

1.  Attendance-- papers in and out.

2.  Quick reminders... Blog,  Project,  Essays... 

3.  Journal-  Where should you get facts for your essay?

3.5  Logos, Pathos, Ethos practice.... Here

4.  Justification readings...

5.    Argument Paragraph Plan:

Topic Sentence-  (opinion)
Fact-        
Opinion-  
O-           
F-              
O-             
O-             
F-              
O-             
O-              
Concluding Sentence-

Sample paragraph in the format.

T * Vietnam veterans deserve better mental health care.

F * For example, Mike Johnson says that, "Nearly 73 percent of Vietnam veterans don't qualify for mental health services."

O * This means the majority of these former soldiers aren't getting the care they need.

O * A lot of them could be suffering from mental disorders and not even know it.

F * In addition, according to Dr. Santarelli, the number of living veterans who served in the Vietnam war "is decreasing rapidly, as these men and women pass away prematurely."

O * In other words, there aren't many Vietnam veterans left.

O * If we want to help those who remain live longer lives, we need to act now.

F * What's more, Mike Johnson goes on to say that, "Helping veterans is cost effective.  If we provide them with mental health screenings, we can save money in the long run."

O * Helping these veterans is possible and cost effective if we put our minds to it.

O * If we offer health screenings now, we won't have to pay for care when mental health becomes an expensive emergency.

C * It is cost effective and possible to help the remaining Vietnam veterans if we want to.
 


What's next?  I have my idea, now what do I do?


6.  Homework!  Come to class with at least 5 quotes in outline form that you will use in your essay and don't forget to make sure to include the places where your quotes (sources) came from.



Outline format for next class:
1.       Intro with your thesis that looks like this:  Vietnam veterans deserve better health care since _________, __________, and ___________.

2.       TS:  Vietnam Veterans deserve better health care because of ____________.

a.       “ fact”  Where I got it from.
b.      “ fact”  Where I got it from.
c.       “ fact”  Where I got it from.

3.       TS:  Vietnam veterans deserve better health care because of _____________.

a.       “ fact”  Where I got it from.
b.      “ fact”  Where I got it from.
c.       “ fact”  Where I got it from.

4.       TS:  Vietnam veterans deserve better health care because of ____________.

a.       “ fact”  Where I got it from.
b.      “ fact”  Where I got it from.
c.       “ fact”  Where I got it from.

5.       Conclusion.


7.  What's next?  Project, Essay....  Argument Essay due Monday, April 1st.

Monday, March 18, 2013

Check-point and Argument...

1.  Attendance.

2.  Evaluations

 3. Calendar Check... Heads up!

4.  Journal-  What's an issue that you care about enough to do something about?

5.  Next Essay and Notes.

6.  Essay Format-
 _____________________________________________________________________

I.  Intro with 7-10 sentences. 

Thesis is last sentence and should be a statement of opinion with 3 main points.

II.  First body paragraph-- 3 facts.

III.  Second body paragraph-- 3 facts.

IV.  Third body paragraph-- 3 facts.

V.  Conclusion... restate and sum up.

________________________________________________________________________

7.  Logos, Pathos, Ethos.
 ________________________________________________________________________

Logos:  Convincing using logic.  For us, mostly facts.

Pathos:  Convincing using emotion.  Use sparingly.

Ethos:     Convincing through the author's character.   
_________________________________________________________________________


8.  Requirements....

Works CitedMLA format.  5 Sources.  Biased, etc.

9.  HW-  Come to class with a topic, and a justification for that topic, like the one below.

My Justification as a model of your HW-

      For my first argumentative essay, I'm choosing to focus on Vietnam Veterans and the lack of services offered to these Americans.  This essay matters to me because my father is dead due, possibly, to a lack of support services for returning veterans.  When he died at the age of 44 from drug and alcohol abuse, I felt lost and confused, so maybe helping others or finding ways for others to get help, will prevent another from feeling how I felt.  This matters to others because most of us know someone who has returned or will return from war.  In fact, as we go through life, we'll meet more and more people affected by their service, and as these people become our friends and family members, we'll want them to have the services my father didn't.  What's more, as a society, we owe those who were willing to enlist the proper services upon their return so that they can integrate themselves back into our world and become a part of what we love in America.  This is interesting because PTSD is something that has recently become part of our national conversation, and some of the soldiers who, unfortunately, experience PTSD commit crimes or other atrocities.  I believe services will help our veterans, and I think we should start by helping those who may not have access to services in the past.  It's never too late to start.